We have written some acrostic poems about sea creatures and ladybirds.
An acrostic poem is written using the first letter of the object you are writing about.
Lobsters are big crustaceans.
On their back is a shell.
By the night they swim. Swim in the deep blue sea.
They live in the sea.
Eat, eat, eat
Ready to fight.
by Kevin
Red crabs walk in the sand
Eggs are little as
Dead crabs are big or smallCrabs are red
Red crabs are nice
Are crabs clever?
Breathe under the water
by Pranita
Puffer fish goes out and in
Under the sea
Fast as a jellyfish
Fast and spotty and spiky
Eat little fish
Round and roundFrightened of animals
It is spiky and it has no ears
Spikes come out
Hides in rocks.
by Wendy
Great white shark
Really big
Enemies
Ate an octopus
They can be found in all the oceans Wide jaws
Hundreds of people are scared of sharks
Its mother is huge
They are killed for their fins
Eat fish
Sharks are predators
Hide away
A shark must keep swimming or it will sink
Really great
Kill people
By Tui
Little baby ladybirds can’t fly
A yellow egg stays under a leaf
Did you ever see it crack?You should look on a plant like a swan plant.
But have you seen its pupa?
It’s ready to fly
Right, it landed on my swan plant
Don’t you eat aphids?
By Yaashna
These poems are based on describing words to build up a poem about sea creatures!
These poems are based on describing words to build up a poem about sea creatures!
The jellyfishThe slimy jellyfish
The slimy huge jellyfish
The slimy huge patterned jellyfish
The slimy huge patterned jellyfish was swimming
The slimy huge patterned jellyfish was swimming slowly
The slimy huge patterned jellyfish was swimming slowly around the ocean
The slimy huge patterned jellyfish was swimming slowly around the lovely ocean
The slimy huge patterned jellyfish was swimming slowly around the lovely fantastic ocean
The DolphinThe grey Dolphin
The grey, shiny Dolphin
The grey, shiny, fast Dolphin
The grey, shiny, fast, big Dolphin
The grey shiny, fast, big Dolphin kept splashing
The grey, shiny, fast, big Dolphin kept splashing in the ocean
The grey, shiny, fast, big Dolphin kept splashing in the beautiful ocean
The grey, shiny, fast, big Dolphin kept splashing in the beautiful blue ocean.
Aaliyah
The seahorse
The little, seahorse
The little, colourful seahorse
The little colourful, beautiful seahorse
The little, colourful, beautiful seahorse swam
The little, colourful, beautiful seahorse swam nicely
The little, colourful, beautiful seahorse swam nicely across the ocean
The little, colourful, beautiful seahorse swam nicely across the light blue ocean
The little, colourful, beautiful seahorse swam nicely across the light blue, deep ocean
Chih-Li
The spiky puffer fish
The spiky brown puffer fish
The spiky brown big puffer fish
The spiky brown big puffer fish is blowing
The spiky brown big puffer fish is blowing out and in
The spiky brown big puffer fish is blowing out and in slowly
The spiky brown big puffer fish is blowing out and in slowly under the sea.
The spiky brown big puffer fish is blowing out and in slowly under the blue sea
Wendy
10 comments:
That is fantastic.Miss Lamb you have great writers in your class.
Those poems are great and the pictures are great too.Wendy your pufferfish looks cool
That is some really cool poems!Angela your glowing jellyfish looks really cool!
Good poems did you use pictures from the internet.
Nice poems how did you make it.
What did you use to make it.
To Aiesha,
We used all the information we knew about the animals to write interesting poems.
Hi C1
I like Yaashana's Crab it is like a real crab.
I love your interesting sea animal poems.
WOW...
what wonderful poems you have C1.
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