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Last week Leilani chose to write a play for independent writing.
This was the first time she had ever written a play.
She got together with a group and Ms Gilbert recorded it.
17 comments:
Aydin A7
said...
It was embarassing for me cause I had to take the guts out and eat! Yum! Yum! Yum!
WOW! That was one well written play Leilani. Well done to the actors as well. I wish we had trees like the one in your play but I am not too sure about eating guts from an animal. I hope you will write many more cool plays and film it, good luck:)
17 comments:
It was embarassing for me cause I had to take the guts out and eat!
Yum! Yum! Yum!
It was cool, Aydin took the guts out and ate it!
It was embarassing for me, cause I had to take out the guts and eat it!
Yuk!
yuk don't take the guts out and eat it!
That was rued!
That was a brilliant play Leilani.
was it yuk no
WOW! That was one well written play Leilani. Well done to the actors as well. I wish we had trees like the one in your play but I am not too sure about eating guts from an animal. I hope you will write many more cool plays and film it, good luck:)
That was fun acting. I was a bit nervious.
Leilani your a really good acter you should be on TV. I liked it when Harold the Giraffe shouted so loud then it took J.J's foot off.
Leilani that was a nice play. it was funny when Aydin said cool
Wow, Leilani! I can't believe you wrote your own play. I really like the way you narrated your story.
Miss Lepou
I looked A little silly as JJ but I fell really sorry about Palmy about the guts but because I had I good shouting voice "Phewwwww"!
But I had lots of fun doing the play!
I hope the next story Leilani, Nancy or I do will be a Extraordinary Hit!
I kept watching the play again and again and again.t was so cool.
your palay was cool
It was gross when Tito took out the guts from Harold and ate it!!!!
it was funny that j.j. said"aaaaaaawww
Leilani wow you had very good expression
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