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I loved that palmy it was Interresting and Brilliant. Wow I wish I could see dolphins and I don't want to see a Killer Whale.Because they will hurt you.
Palmy that was a awesome as story and it was cool. i liked how you made different voices for the 3 dolphins and the killer whale. You had a clear voice and I liked how you used cool words .
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I like it when you keep looking at the screen and you had a really clear voice.
I loved that palmy it was Interresting and Brilliant. Wow I wish I could see dolphins and I don't want to see a Killer Whale.Because they will hurt you.
I really liked your story Palmy. It was clear and funny!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
wow Palmy i love that you twisted the three little pigs and swapped the name to the three little dolphins!!!! loved it keep it up!!!!
That was a well written story Palmy. I could hear you nice and clear.
Palmy that was a awesome as story and it was cool. i liked how you made different voices for the 3 dolphins and the killer whale. You had a clear voice and I liked how you used cool words .
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